The Red Schoendienst

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so much depends
upon

a red schoen
dienst

brushed with spring
shadows

against a green
wall



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Patrick Dubuque is a wastrel and a general layabout. Many of the sites he has written for are now dead. Follow him on Twitter @euqubud.


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In this commenter’s opinion, Mr. Dubuque is quite correct not to sacrifice objective clarity in order to personalize the image for the reader. The poet presents the Schoendienst, but we are left to ourselves to divine the motives of the object. The Schoendienst is; and thus, are we.

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